Saturday, October 16, 2010

Review - The Ways of Khrem by D. Nathan Hilliard

4 of 5 stars
I received a review copy of the book from the author.

THE WAYS OF KHREM is definitely an entertaining read.  The book contains three interconnected novellas featuring Cargill, the Bookseller and a supporting cast of fascinating characters. 

Cargill has left his criminal past behind him, or so he thinks, to become a respected bookseller, until a knock on his door one day turns out to be Captain Wilhem Drayton of the City Watch.  It seems that Captain Drayton knows all about Cargill’s criminal past, but is willing to overlook it for Cargill’s consulting services.  Cargill has no choice, of course, and a tenuous partnership is born.  Along with Drayton comes two City Watchmen, Heinryk, a veteran of the watch and the younger Poole whose most distinct characteristics are his single dark eyebrow and enough muscles for two men.  The author weaves this trio throughout the novellas and I found that with each story, Mr. Hilliard cleverly reveals a little more about each of them and their own secrets.

I have to say though my favorite character is Grabel, Cargill’s manservant.  Grabel’s main duty is to help Cargill “navigate the treacherous terrain of social intercourse” which he does with skill, efficiency and indifferent boredom.  The banter back and forth between these two men had me laughing out loud on several occasions – each of them trying their best to torture the other.  As Cargill says, Grabel “has the remarkable ability to roll his eyes without actually rolling his eyes.”  Even though on the surface their relationship seems argumentative and testy, I got the impression that each of them looked out for the other in their own way. 

I liked “The Ghost of Candlewalk Lane” the most of the 3 stories, but each story is quite enjoyable.  I would definitely recommend that you pick up this book and allow Mr. Hilliard to introduce you to the city of Khrem and all that inhabit it, both above and below ground.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

REDEDICATIONS


Due to yo-yo eating and inconsistent workouts, I’ve had to rededicate myself to consistent exercise & consistent healthy eating. One of my goals is to be in skinny jeans by Christmas. Yes, I said skinny jeans. Not that I’m big on them, it just gives me a nice goal to envision.
Anyhoo, I’m working (along w/a lil help from here and there) on a detox plan that will include colonics. Don’t know what a colonic is?.. Well, think of it as a major enema or just read {here}.  It’s been a few years since I’ve had one but I’m definitely not a stranger to them. I’ve already scheduled a colonic for next week so expect a post on it.I’m also paying really close attention to the ingredient listing on ALL products. Vegan included. *Carolyn Akens had warned me about that.* It’s amazing (and sad & unfortunate) how much crappy shit is in the majority of things sold. Since I’m still working out the details of my detox plan & eating habits, I’ll have to post on that later. Or it may turn out to be something that I sort of “wing” as I get retuned to listening to my body. Either way, I’ll be chronicling all of this, in some way, on the blog.






As far as my workouts are concerned, I’ve gone back to the gym and am working on my running (better yet jogging). I’m doing pretty good so far. And will continue to work on increasing my distance. I have an awesome goal. I’ll be returning to jog the Peachtree 2011 . This is my main motivation for working on my jogging endurance and time. It’s not until July 4th, so my plans are to be more than ready for it by then. What I’m even more excited about is the half-marathon that I’ll be participating in Thanksgiving Day morning. *I’m so stocked about it!* Wish me success!
I’ll definitely post on the experience.



Is there anything that you’ve had to rededicate yourself to lately?....

The Wedding Pictures!

Usually my blog posts are about my writing career, but every now and then I can't help but post some personal events.  For those who don't know, on Sunday, 10/10/10, my daughter, Amanda, married her fiance, John.  My husband Ron and I were so happy and proud.  It was a spectacular day!

It started off with the most beautiful sunrise at the beach:

How could anything go wrong with such a beautiful start to the day.  Next up was all kinds of preparations for the ceremony room and the reception hall.
These are the table centerpieces designed by Sandy and I.

There was also a candy table.  Had to keep everyone's sugar level steady.

Here's my son Josh, with Amanda, after she had her hair done.

Here's the arch for the ceremony.  All floral bouquets including the bridal and bridesmaid's bouquets were done by my best friend, Sandy, and I.

Here's my beautiful daughter, Amanda!

And the bridesmaids!

The proud mother with her daughter!


and the happy bride and groom!

Mr. and Mrs.!

My kids, Josh and Amanda

The proud parents with the bride and groom!

and finally the wedding cake!

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

CAROLYN'S CORNER on NUTS AND SEEDS HIGH IN VITAMIN E

Nuts and seeds pic from http://www.breakfastatstephanies.com/



Sunflower seeds


Walnuts

Almonds

Hazelnuts

Cashews


Brazil nuts

Pecans

Pine nuts

Pumpkin seeds




Carolyn Akens


Health Coach

Email: carolyn@carolynakens.com

Phone: (678) 807-9187

Website: http://www.carolynakens.com/

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Visit CarolynAkens.com for information on Health Coaching, Raw Food Classes & Workshops, Raw Chef & Instructor Certifications, and my Speaking Engagements.

Send correspondence to: PO Box 11
Alpharetta, GA 30009-0011

 
Thanks to Carolyn for this information. I have yet to try some of these nuts, so I'll definitely put them on the list.

New Release - Guardian of the Mountain by David Dalglish



My author buddy, David Dalglish and I have a running joke – I’m the “unofficial David Dalglish.”  Not me personally, but my blog.  Because I've featured David on my blog a few times both with an author interview and a review of one of his books, the Two Ends of the Pen webpage consistently came up when readers did a google search for the “official website David Dalglish.”  We had a good laugh about that and then David figured it was time he had his own website.  It’s actually called “Official Website of David Dalglish” so I guess I can no longer claim that title, but I'm still happy to feature his new releases.  So without further adieu, here’s David to talk about his newest book:  “Guardian of the Mountain.”



Back in high school, I remember watching a top ten countdown of the best horror movies. Having never really read or watched much horror at the time, I was fascinated. I decided I wanted to try and write the best horror story ever by combining all the similar aspects that each movie had. Stranded in the middle of nowhere? Check. Vicious, unstoppable monster? Check. Lots of darkness? Check. Creepy young girl? Check.

Of course, I stuck the story in a fantasy setting, since that's what I *was* reading at the time. The story came out pretty good, and more importantly, it began what would later become my first novel. I was so proud of that story.

And then my hard drive crashed, and me being the brilliant man I am, had no backup. Gone. So now here I am, ten years later, thinking I've actually learned a few things (mainly back up your dang stories). So I took a stab at the story once more. An added bonus for anyone who's read my other works: Mira from my Half-Orc Series is first introduced here, giving some background on a character I probably failed to really do justice so far in my series.

But forget all that. This story is horror. And fantasy. The mountain is full of gold, but its Guardian won't let the riches be stolen so easily...

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Panel Discussion 4: Beta Readers - Do You Listen to Them?

It seems the panel discussion idea has become quite popular among my fellow author friends.  Today our third panel of authors will lend their opinions on the role of beta readers.  Here’s the question:


How much of your manuscript are you willing to change/edit based on your beta readers comments?  Or do you just use your beta readers to check for grammatical issues?


I would like to start the comments for this panel question.  Both Dave and I take our readers’ comments very seriously especially if there is an issue of confusion surrounding a character or scene.  Because we know what happens in the story, sometimes we assume too much.  This happened with our first book and once we got the comments back from our readers, we were able to see that there was definitely a few plot holes that needed to be fixed.  Of course, we also want our readers to point out the typos because frankly, after you’ve read the same book so many times, your eyes automatically “put” the right word in the sentence.  Once the typo is pointed out, all you can do is a *face palm* that you didn’t catch it in the previous 99 times you’ve read it and then go fix it.



T.L. Haddix:
It depends very much on the nature of the comments.  If I am fairly confident that my book is good, well-rounded, no plot holes, I’m basically looking for grammatical errors or typos when I send the ‘script to beta readers.  If I have doubts about the book itself, I’m looking for guidance.  My second book was a challenge to get to the finish line.  I had lived with the characters for so long that even though I knew there were issues with the plot, I just couldn’t see them.  Once my betas had the manuscript in their hands and feedback started coming back in, I was able to see the book differently, and fix the problems.  So, to answer your question directly, anything from minor grammatical corrections to major plot issues, or more succinctly, whatever the story needs.



Camille LaGuire
I am happy to get any feedback a reader will give me.  If they want to check my spelling, they can.  But what I really need them for is to hold up a mirror and show me what my work looks like to the outside world.  I don't ask them to tell me what to do, I just want to know how they react as readers.  I then decide what to change or not based on their reaction.









Ellen O’Connell:
While I'm interested in anything beta readers have to say, I give them a book before final editing and proofreading and tell them that. My theory is that I'm probably going to change some things before finalizing the book, so there's no need to spend time proofing work that may be revised. The feedback I want from beta readers is: (1) does the story hold their interest? is the pacing good? and (2) do the characters seem real? are they sympathetic?  Needless to say I'm not willing to just throw a story away based on beta readers, but I have made major changes in the two books I have out now because of their opinions. The one that stands out is that for both my current books, beta readers said the heroines were too strong - bitchy. Even though I didn't see it, I toned both those characters down. Feedback from readers is that the main attraction for each book is the female protagonist. Readers see them as strong yet likable women. In particular Anne, the heroine of my romance, evokes very positive reactions from readers. Am I glad I listened to my beta readers and changed those characters? You bet! So I am willing to make major changes, not necessarily if one beta reader mentions something, but if all or several do. I hope to have at least four beta readers for the next book.

Daniel Pyle:
I have a pretty stinking fantastic group of beta readers, and I trust them a lot.  If they told me I needed to change 100% of my manuscript, I'd do it.  In fact, if they told me to run into a lion's den carrying an injured baby gazelle, I probably would.  They all have different strengths as readers and editors.  Some of them are great at picking up the grammar and proofing mistakes, some of them are plot hole finders, and some of them notice things like stagnant pacing and flat characters and bad dialogue and run-on sentences.  As a group, they've got it all.  Without my betas, I'd be lost.  I owe them each a lifetime's worth of drinks and hugs.

Sunday, October 10, 2010

GOOD NEWS MONDAY QUOTE FOR THE WEEK

pic of caterpillar becoming a Chrysalis from TheButterflySite.com


"Life is a process of becoming, a combination of states we have to go through. Where people fail is that they wish to elect a state and remain in it. This is a kind of death."
~Anaïs Nin


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